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It's always this way with you, gorgeous

Shimmer;shatter
Sparkle/break
Sweet glass
Bones of steel
D I A M O N D skin one day
But not now
Never now

And his caress imprinted on your jaw
so many m i n u t e fractures
That  b u r n d a r l i n g b u r n
Melt back together
S•t•r•e•t•c•h
Seared forever
Hurt
Hurt
Hurt


And he turned you B A C K T O S A N D
With his touch
And that v o i c e
And those E Y E S
Like ohso many bolts
Of c l e a n C U T lightening

And you fell
d
o
w
n

At his feet
And you didn't mind o n e b i t

But now w e e p
My darling
Because lightening only strikes the same place o n c e
(or so you've been told)
And the storm has passed
Left you b|e|h|i|n|d
With nothing
But skin of fractured glass
And a heart
That won't stop shatterbreakaching
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BrImmy © themselves
Title © Counting Crows
Poem © me
Style of Freeverse © a7xerfoREVer [link]
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~a7xerfoREVer Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I DO NOT HAVE ANYTHING SUFFICIENT FOR THIS THING YOU HAVE WRITTEN.
this was just beautiful. it was one of the most beautiful things i've ever read. the pain was beautiful. i felt it kick my ass and hand it to me, m'serious.
you really know how to break a kid's heart, you know? in a good way.
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~Statycstorm Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah thank you. :) :heart:
All I've been able to write recently is sad, pain-filled BrImmy. With occasional other pairings. But it's always got Jimmy and it's always sad. So, hate to say it, but prepare for some more heartbreak.
:heartbreaker: <- most accurate emoticon ever.
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~HeroineOfTheDay Aug 9, 2012  Student Writer
Beautifully written <3
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~Statycstorm Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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~HeroineOfTheDay Aug 16, 2012  Student Writer
Certanly!
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